I left,
I left
teary-eyed,
I left
teary-eyed and hollow,
I left
teary-eyed, hollow and broken,
Just like
the last three times, when they trampled on my heart
I know,
I know you,
I know you
are different,
I know the
different you and that your kindest heart,
Did not
mean to break me up, but build lovingly
I loved,
I loved you,
I loved you
like a snow flake,
I loved you
like a snow flake rushing to meet the mountain,
Like the
stars in a child’s eyes, and the aisle waiting for the to-be-weds
I wish,
I wish for
you,
I wish for
you to have the moon,
I wish that
you will wish for me, even when you’re there,
But you won’t
and then I’ll wish I dint wish for you anymore
I burn,
I burn with
pain, the feeble kind,
I burn to
not destroy, and not to build,
I burn because
I’m ought to burn,
I burn in
the misery that every lover burns,
Like the
way the phoenix burns, like the way it burns before it rises again.
This is the fifth part of the Writing Project in collaboration with Kapil, we started a few weeks back. We choose a word every week and write our take on it. This week the word is 'Burn'. For Kapil's work click on the link here http://kapilankar.blogspot.com/2015/12/burn.html
This is the fifth part of the Writing Project in collaboration with Kapil, we started a few weeks back. We choose a word every week and write our take on it. This week the word is 'Burn'. For Kapil's work click on the link here http://kapilankar.blogspot.com/2015/12/burn.html
A really good one! I loved the construct. Innovative way to write :-) I love the wish stanza the most! I bet it can be done in song beautifully
ReplyDeleteThank u naveen! The wish stanza is my favourite too. :) :) u know what when I was writing I was thinking the same thing.. Might sound like lyrics of a song.
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